
it's from fairly late in the issue, as you see, but not spoilery.
i've been trying to improve my art without making it, you know, too unlike the art of volume 1 (cause i want it to be all one cohesive work eventually, & god should strike me down if if i ever try to re-redraw pages). some blogger said i don't draw in perspective, which was shockingly untrue, but has also caused me to consciously move past one-point all the time. hopefully the two- & occasional three-point panels give the jobnik!world more depth.... i'm liking them anyhow. i'm also trying to be even more conscious about character design & popping foreground elements out from the background, although i can't say i've cracked the latter yet.
also, as you can see, i'm laying the handlettering down on the page from the get-go, which may be contributing to my slowness.
what do you think?